Post by account_disabled on Feb 19, 2024 8:04:10 GMT
AtTask attask Click for full-size image Oh boy, this is going to be fun… 1. Hello bounce rate! You have just a few seconds to grab a visitor’s attention. All of which is entirely wasted with this page. I’m assuming the logos next to the headline are a mistake (please tell me they’re a mistake) but even if that were forgivable the headline is just rubbish. “Task Management Software” tells me nothing about what I’m doing here and what I’m going to do next. Let’s try something like this: “Manage your tasks effortlessly from one easy interface” or “Unchain yourself from DONE”. 2.
Features are great but… What do they do for me? What will universal Buy TG Database compatibility do for my workflow? A small benefit below each feature would make them 10 times more powerful and connect with the problems that this software solves. Also, since when did Project Management become a feature? 3. Are all of these REALLY required? Why is this form so long just to see a demo? This form needs 4 fields: Name, Company, Email, and Phone Number. A few lines of code can pull a country, and everything else can be found out by the sales rep who is obviously going to be contacting the lead for the demo.
4. Add insult to injury As if this page wasn’t bad enough, there is that pesky “submit” button again. Lose it or be stuck in a rut of bad conversion rates for the rest of eternity. Backupify backupify Click for full-size image 1. Great headline This is what I like to see. Not only is the headline clear, to the point and hits on emotional triggers, but backupify has used color contrast and encapsulation to emphasize the most important part of the page – the lead gen form… beautiful. 2. An opportunity missed “Download this report” can easily be improved with a benefit statement.
Features are great but… What do they do for me? What will universal Buy TG Database compatibility do for my workflow? A small benefit below each feature would make them 10 times more powerful and connect with the problems that this software solves. Also, since when did Project Management become a feature? 3. Are all of these REALLY required? Why is this form so long just to see a demo? This form needs 4 fields: Name, Company, Email, and Phone Number. A few lines of code can pull a country, and everything else can be found out by the sales rep who is obviously going to be contacting the lead for the demo.
4. Add insult to injury As if this page wasn’t bad enough, there is that pesky “submit” button again. Lose it or be stuck in a rut of bad conversion rates for the rest of eternity. Backupify backupify Click for full-size image 1. Great headline This is what I like to see. Not only is the headline clear, to the point and hits on emotional triggers, but backupify has used color contrast and encapsulation to emphasize the most important part of the page – the lead gen form… beautiful. 2. An opportunity missed “Download this report” can easily be improved with a benefit statement.